1)Felipe Sousa de Souza
1) Craftsmanship: Good
I see that you are better with the computers than in this area of craftsmanship but you took great care: well
2) Creativity: good
Good idea to use the CDs was very good because they could already work as prefabricated models, I would also experiment with new ways and introduce nature to your architecture.
3) Levels of Scale : excellent
You have a perfect knowledge of the scale to be Architect and interior designer do not lack. Your design is very clear on Kitchen Island I like the idea of bar in your own house, excellent.
4) Presentation: good
You made a good presentation of all your work, very clear and detailed, the colors also I like. 5) Design: good
I like your concept The Modern Movement is centrist, is simple, clear, very Bauhaus and your presentation very good developing every step you take.
5) Design: good
I also like your geometric design in your context model, but I have an observation. You mean a "peaceful area in our every day", you imagine all your neighbors when everybody goes to work in the morning all around each round in their roundabouts, I think it will not be at that moment very peaceful area. To improve this context you can reduce the roads to an outside and perhaps to one in the middle, the rest would leave as green area.
2) EYLÜL DEMİRCAN | SPATIAL101X
1) Craftsmanship: excellent
Developed your models very well with few materials but very clear and the contrast of white with wood as natural elements I like a lot.
2) creativity: good
In your first model of the first week I really liked the game of lights that you use very interesting, that's called Biophilia. As Whoami says "Creates a dramatic yet introspective feeling" Another aspect to take into account when designing something.
3) Levels of Scale: good
You work very well with the scales in the model one of the doors you are small, but this is a concpto
4) Presentation: good
You made a good presentation of all your work, very clear and detailed, could be better.
5) Design: good
I like your water theme Water, and it fits very well with the location of your project. That if the contextual plane of the place did not see it. The idea of putting a tree or making a natural column with a real trunk is very good, it gives that connection with the necessary nature in a place like this
1) Craftsmanship: excellent
Developed your models very well with few materials but very clear and the contrast of white with wood as natural elements I like a lot.
2) creativity: good
In your first model of the first week I really liked the game of lights that you use very interesting, that's called Biophilia. As Whoami says "Creates a dramatic yet introspective feeling" Another aspect to take into account when designing something.
3) Levels of Scale: good
You work very well with the scales in the model one of the doors you are small, but this is a concpto
4) Presentation: good
You made a good presentation of all your work, very clear and detailed, could be better.
5) Design: good
I like your water theme Water, and it fits very well with the location of your project. That if the contextual plane of the place did not see it. The idea of putting a tree or making a natural column with a real trunk is very good, it gives that connection with the necessary nature in a place like this
3)Pi3dot14
1) Craftsmanship: Sufficient
You have very good ideas, I love your idea of the floating paradise, I like that you were the only one that used a kind of putty to make the models,
The children's park also has color and you see what you wanted to show. I would advise you to keep trying to do this kind of things and observe the examples on the internet, that will give you even more ideas to achieve your goal.
2) creativity: good
In week 3 you worked very well, you made an excellent sketch of your house, I like that you think of a sustainable house totally, in solar panels, to create your own vegetables, purify the water, so far we are only two that mention these details , Of which I have seen, there are sure more people what do think so.
3) Levels of Scale: sufficient
I would advise you to work with the scale midas everything you have in your house and draw it at scale 1:50, where in 1 centimeter there is half a meter. As a practice, think for example that a pool can not be 1 or two meters, it would be a small babypool and not a big realy pool.
4) Presentation: sufficient
You made a good presentation of all your work, very clear and detailed. A presentation can always be improved.
5) Design: good
I like your theme to make a floating paradise, I like also your curved form, which is not a cube.
You have good ideas and if you continue practicing and drawing what you see you can improve on your designs.
4)Sam
1) Craftsmanship: Sufficient
You have very good ideas, you started very well, it was a pity that you could not continue.
2) creativity: good
I liked the shape of your house, it was very nice. The walls in zig zach very interesting.
3) Levels of Scale: sufficient
You started with a two-story house, which was perfect
4) Presentation: insufficient
As a designer, congratulations with your award, grate!
5) Design: insufficient
You have good ideas and if you keep practicing and making models you can improve on your architectural designs, it's a pity that you could not continue. A hug and move on.
